User blog:SiRenfield/TTGOMC Review: Mikia

Expect the words "rip-off" and "unoriginal" to show up on this post a lot.

"Mikia is quiet and smart.She talks but not that much.She is shy sometimes but likes to interact with people."

Pick one! While shy people can interact at times, you basically just ignored the entire definiton of "shy". But that's just the tip of the iceburg.

"When Mikia was 4 years old,her parents got killed by a witch but the witch was killed by Mami Tomoe.By that time,Mikia was shocked and sad to see her parents die.Mami Tomoe was Mikia's caretaker."

Stop for a second!...This is just Yuma's backstory ,but with Mami instead of Kyoko!

"Since Mami was killed by Charlotte,Mikia took care of herself."

Makes me wonder why she was never mentioned other than "because it's a fan fic" ,but whatever.

"She always wonder why people die.When she was walking around the park,she saw Kyubey on the bench.Kyubey contracted Mikia that day."

And what was her wish you ask?

"Her wish is to save many lives from witches."

Shouldn't that kind of go without saying since that's, oh I don't know, WHAT MAGICAL GIRLS DO IN THE FIRST PLACE! This and Christina's OC are basically the epitome of wishes that only serve as a Deus ex Machinma. Their wishes function to further their Sueness so they won't be challenged by the events of the narrative. And you wanna know what her powers are?

"(work of proccess)"

Yeah, they're non-existent since she, pretty much like everyone else, left the Wiki and left a bunch of orphaned pages behind.

Also this is a minor nitpick ,but her birthdate is 2002. Meaning that she would be nine at the time of the events of Madoka Magica. Then why is she wearing the middle school unfirom in her regular clothes? Is this taking place after Madoka Magica, I don't get it.