Talk:Anastasia's Magical Wish/@comment-168.221.159.18-20150921160110

This physically pains me. I like that you're trying to be creative, but this alone makes me not want to read this fanfiction. I myself am working on a Puella Magi fanfiction, but I didn't start writing mine until I got my research done. The concept is pretty interesting though. But it still looks bad from this page alone. Why do they have Japanses surnames and Western first names? Not trying to seem rude, but I don't get that part. But I like how you have one from another planet though since the Incubators traveled the universe before solely using humans as an energy source. I MIGHT read this if I can find it. Like I said, interesting concept but it still doesn't sound appealing.