User blog:SiRenfield/TTGOMC Review: Chiyo

This author made a bunch of OCs that you can defiently tell are made by the same chick considering how like a lot of fan characthers, she just took screencaps from dress-up games and called it "her art". However we're only gonna focuse on Chiyo since while Ichoka's OCs were bad...

AT LEAST THEY DIDN'T CLAIM GODHOOD! Okay, neither those or this was direct ,but the point is that the Sueness is just too much to contain!

"She does not need to wear glasses, but does anyway."

Okay to be fair, there are such things as cosmetics glasses ,but that's just the tip of the iceburg.

"Chiyo was originally born in Tokyo city until her mom died in a car crash and afterwards she left somehow survived"

Wow, even the author is questioning the plot holes in her story! Also "somehow" does not replace explanation.

"She changed her name to Chiyo meaning forever/eternal, and wore her mothers glasses."

Okay it's a better excuse than "because they look cool"

"Afterwards she was moved to Mitakihara City where she lived for a long time with her dad until one day she met Kyubey. She learned her family got into the car crash because of a witch and made a wish to have a companion to be with her."

Then why did she change her name? It's not like she's an orphan, she's now living with her dad. Did she just legally change her name from Hoshi because it sounds pretty?

So aside from more of this story, the fact that she's totally BFFs with the main cast, pointless information and no ***t facts like "Because she was born in 1998, she's 14!" she also has a theme song. Which is basically just a Persona 3 song, because obviously her theme song also has to be stolen from a completely different franchise. And why that song in particular?

"Due to Chiyo having the ability to control Fire. Chiyo often says she would like to burn her dread. Thus, the song."

Who seriously dedicates a 4 minute song to explain their powers? Now that you excuse me I now have a 2-hour song about how I can turn invisble.

But the main point is: Why does she have an Ultimate Form? It's not like Sailor Moon, where it's like an upgrade, Madoka literally ascended to godhood! It's never explained.

Overall, she's not as bad as the cast of Magical Girls' Fantasy ,but this seriously needs some kind of explanation.

November 13, 2014: Why do I keep skipping over information? The actually explanation is that her friend made a contract to save her? Cliched? Maybe ,but in hindsight the friend could've also saved the mother as well.