Talk:Magical Molly! Reboot (franchise)/@comment-44756787-20200103002125

So, I understand you didn't make the "4Kids dub", but did you make the reboot? If so, I have a few critiques. If not, I can always make my own version, but I'd like to share anyways. There is WAY too much going on here! 1. Where is Kyubey?

2. There are just a FEW too many characters. Try to cut down on duplicate rehashes of canon characters (clone Hilda and Homrue) as well as adaptations of OCs that aren't yours (Jinna and Jane). For spin-offs, try to focus on titular characters and other MCs closest to them, instead of trying to cram in everything.

3. Since the Kajiurans are named after the composer for Madoka Magica, shouldn't they have a musical theme?

4. DIAL DOWN THE NAME REFERENCES! Having characters go by their Japanese names defeats the purpose of their names changing. But, some of them can stay. For example, Monica's pen name is fine, and Katie's middle initial could stand for "Kirika", rather than her having it as a nickname.

5. This idea has potential for a crossover with its original incarnation, so maybe change the designs up a bit to stand out from their counterparts. It doesn't have to be much, maybe just changing Sabrina's hairpin to her Soul/Magic Gem or removing Maria's hat. Little things like that to differentiate them visually.

6. Try changing Morianna to Ultimate Madoka. I found this thing, https://allanimefanonandfandoms.fandom.com/wiki/Molly_(Magica_Quartlet's_Magical_Molly!) and it could really make it feel like Magical Molly is a part of the PMMM universe.